Thanks for stopping by to check out my draft of Step 3 – ASS#1. I have also included a link to my Step 4, as I believe it is completed and thought it may be worth uploading also. Please feel free to leave me feedback, constructive criticism is also welcomed.
Step 3 is definitely a draft, my sick child will not stay asleep and this is my last chance to post my draft. So any feedback will definitely help as I am not sure I am on the right path.
Looking forward to reading your drafts also, thank you in advance 🙂
Cherie Blogs 
Hello Cherie, i hope your sick child is feeling better. I really enjoyed reading your assignment on your company Scania. My company Geely is also an automotive company selling innovative passenger vehicles to the Chinese market, so is similar in nature. I like the way you opened up talking about whats in your reports and the questions you had associated with the content. I liked the way you used point form in a couple of areas, showing highlights and interesting points. The paragraph on partnerships is well discussed and referring back to the study guide makes me think you have tackled the KCQ’s very well. You also do it well with referring back to your work life experiences .My weakness is grammar and in general most aspects of essay writing, so to see this different style that looks to be well structured is what i assume to be the benefit of online communication. I have a lot to learn in writing and Studiosity was very helpful with feedback on my draft.
Good luck with the rest of your assignment.
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Thanks Kev! This has given me a wonderful boost of confidence going forward. I’ll be sure to take your advice and submit to studiosity for a check over.
I’ll jump over to your blog and take a look too, have a great weekend!
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Hi Cherie-lee,
Great start to your assignment. It’s well written and engaging.
I was quick to see a couple of similarities between our company’s and our responses. Firstly I had the same thought when I opened my report, is 100/150 pages a long or short report? Regardless, the search tool and contents page is very useful throughout the process.
Innovation and sustainability are also key values for my utilities company. It’s great to see many company’s values reflecting an environmental awareness, however I am starting to see a trend that many Europe based company’s have sustainability at the forefront, I wonder if this would be the same when comparing Australian companies in the current political environment.
Great work and good luck with the rest of your assignment.
Louise
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Hi Cherie
You have summed up Scania very well and provided me easy access to more information about the company in an easy read and accessible manner. I learned something reading you KCQ’s and learning about your company and that is something you should take pride in. Well done and keep up the good work. For this report (step 4) there was two things that stood out to me, firstly the amount of data you had to input, great stuff on managing to keep it all together doing that alone. The second this was something I’m also guilty of, and have been caught out on it before, Capital letters at the start of each line, and highlighting the titles . Simple nit picking I know, but I have felt silly not picking up on that in my work previously when someone has found it when it was too late to correct. Otherwise again, great work! You are going to do just fine in this unit.
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